The rule of Shang Tsung: chapter one: May kombat begin
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The rule of Shang Tsung: chapter one: May kombat begin
09/10/2005 08:15 PM EDT
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RE: Fan Submission: The rule of Shang Tsung: chapter one: May kombat begin
10/06/2005 12:05 PM EDT
Sorry it took long to respond.

Looks good so far.
My only complaint is the lack of quotation marks for dialogue. There are some points where it's hard to tell if someone's talking, thinking, or if it's just narration.

Like that Shang Tsung keeps rearranging the fights to better eliminate potential threats. Seems like something he would do.

Also liked the vague hints of Scorpion's presence.

Curious though if Raiden is still participating or if he participated at all, since in MK1 Tsung personally invited Raiden to compete.

From the first chapter, this looks interesting so far.
I'm hoping in future chapters you explain and/or flesh out Shang Tsung's past and what made him what he is.
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