She looks badass. Kinda has that biker chick feel to her. Well done.

To me she has more of an...Enchantress feel to the clothes...

Everything is pretty good, but that EYE SCAR!!!

...looks kinda awkward in this angle

4.5/5 - You're good, Icebaby, keep these up!

I think the sorceress/biker flavor is going to come down to whether you perceive her outfit to be silk or leather.

Your anatomy is steadily improving. Keep it up.

As for the design... It really doesn't scream frost to me. I mean, without the blue hair, I would have guessed it was Kitana.

Thanks for your feedback both Daryui and Shinnok619. I appreciate it!!!

Yeah there are some things to fix and change a bit, but this is finally the look I've been trying to work with for this character. And since I'm re-writing the entire story now, her appearance makes sense... most rebellious people would wear such clothing, *hint hint* she's a rebel!!!!

Hopefully, some time this week, I'll have at least the introduction done to show you guys why there's huge changes to these characters and why they are here.

Once again, I appreciate the feedback!

Commented right after I posted, haha... Thanks for the feedback.

I'm glad users like you and kingjolly comments about the anatomy, which I've never quite created properly up until I managed to buy a lot of art books that helped me fix these issues.

The coat is supposed to be leather, it'll be awhile to actually design these characters with a good comic feeling, I'm just going to stick with colored pencils until I can be really good using Photoshop and other art programs.

The look itself is just supposed to show rebel. I don't want to tell too much without writing everything out. But hopefully, you get the picture just by me telling you she's supposed to be a rebel.

But thank you a lot for the feedback!

No problem at all!

Sounds awesome, can't wait to learn more about it!

I like it.

Does anyone else get an ANKO vibe from this picture....or is it just me?

(Anko - Naruto + Shippuuden )

Thank you for the feedback.

To be honest, I'm not a fan of Frost because she just seems like a female Sub-Zero. However, your design gives her a unique style that is different from Subby, and that makes her more intriguing to me. Frost has always been a bit of a rebel, so having her ditch the Lin Kuei look makes sense.

The head seems a little big for her body, but this is a nice drawing overall. You made Frost interesting to me, so that deserves some props!