For a second I thought this was about this DC hero, Cyborg (potential for GAU). From the eyes it looks like this could be Cyber Smoke, especially when this reminds of Cyber Sub-Zero who is supposed to wear the suit that Smoke would've probably ended up wearing once automated.
Artistically I can say that you drew the right foot pretty well even though it looks slightly twisted. He needs a bigger chest for all the shurikens. Hands aren't clearly your thing – try to practise them for the next art. Before that, I'd like to see this one colored though. Cyber Smoke, anybody?4/5 ₯

I had no intentions on re-drawing any of the cyborgs. It's just one I created of my own. I did, however, color this character purple and black, despite that I've already stated that he's uncolored.

But anyways, I appreciate the criticism and feedback and thank you for the dragon points.

Not bad. But the lower legs are far too short

If Cyrax and the Predator had sex, this would be their kid. 5/5

I'll keep this in mind the next time I decide to work on another cyborg.



Haha, thanks! I needed a good laugh today.

I can dig it. Good work. 5/5

Why thank you!

It's good, really good. It looks like the details are more noticeable in this one; the lines seem darker and less faded (which is good) compared to some of your earlier submissions from what I remember. And the shading is also nicely done.

As for proportion, it looks good for the most part, although I do agree that the right leg is a little short from the knee to the foot. I can't see anything wrong with the hands except they're not too detailed (which isn't actually a problem; there doesn't have to be a lot going on with the hands). I actually like the smaller chest for this character; it makes him look a lot sleeker and more mobile than the cyborgs in MK, kind of like a version 2.0.

I know you're not trying to make a cyborg from any of the games in the series, but I think he'd look like Cyber-smoke with a purple and black color scheme. I could be wrong though. Are you going to post the colored version?

Oh, and my rating is 4.5, rounded up to a five, by the way.

Keep it in mind when you draw figures in general. It's a problem with human anatomy, not cyborg anatomy specifically.